handythomas' Poetry

[handythomas]

Tonite while dreaming in the fantasy of plight,
I overheard the din of my thoughts that night.
So pure, so pious and only for her,
I am yearning and longing for my lady love.

Wishes and blessings all are thine,
The world now looks so divine.
To myself I owe the promise I did,
With the bond of love neither strained nor undid.

Don't know why so strange I think,
Has the bond of love now left without the ‘pink’?
The life and the breath now standing on the edge,
Just like a man walking on a wedge.

Going on and on forever is life,
Has it a stop destined or ever it has mercy of thine.
The beauty of love is the pain that it gives,
With the nausea and sting that succumbs me to end.

Losing her is the biggest fear of mine,
Or its something actually destined.
Though she loves me more than anything I compare
All the smiles of the world look small and bare.

The fear that's there is actually tough,
With the confusion all around that blows me in puff.
Am I really not able to decipher my fate?
Or the thing at stake is really so late.

I know it’s not the final end,
The love will someday take over and stand.
Time flows, as does the sand from the fist,
Some day I’ll regain all that’s lost in the mist.....

[handythomas]

I waited for your love in hope,
That ours would come again,
And make me feel the things I felt,
When we were one, back then.

But time and distance have erased,
The things I wished anew,
And now I find myself alone,
Though I am here with you.

What good is love, that does not touch,
What good is love, that gives you pain.
What good is love, that makes you run,
And makes you lost out in the rain.

I traveled to another world,
Out far beyond the one we knew,
I thought that I could live again,
And now I find I'm back with you.

But what of hearts that beat as one,
And what of passion and embrace,
Is it too much to ask of you,
To make these tears of mine erase.

What good is love, that does not touch,
What good is love, that gives you pain.
What good is love, that makes you run,
And makes you lost out in the rain.

Too painful this - to journey back,
To times of love and laughter free,
The times we lay together with
A sense of you , a sense of me.

So now, I journey on alone,
Forever wandering, in my thoughts,
And I shall ask you once again,
What good is love.
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Love is not just a word. If the expression of love is not there in all its expressed senses, then it is not what Love should be.

[George of the jungle]

Hmm.. I liked the poem. The rythmn and your word choice was good too. Umm, well, I think that's all I can say. Sorry, not really good at giving critiques. But hey, your poem was really good and the thoughts behind it was awesome.

[George of the jungle]

OH.MY.gOD. That was really GOOD!!! I really felt the wanted emotions a reader must feel when reading poems of this kind. WOW!! YOu really are good. I make poems too but not this good. Oh, I like your poems. Keep writing HandyThomas. I am really looking forward to it.

GJ

P.S. You don't need to make another thread for each of your poem. One thread is enough for all of your poems. All you need to do is to edit your topic title, I think. Sorry, I am also new and still exploring the forums. You can ask Vincent (admin) if you have any problems or need any help if I we're you. hehe

[~Vinr~]

I merged them. XP Apologies, but it really helps organization-wise to just have one thread per user. ^_^ And if you wish to change the title (wouldn't blame you, honestly) you can just edit the original post. PM me if you have any questions or comments! Thanks!

And, on your poetry, I'd say my favorite of the two is What good is love. Great job, handythomas, keep writing!