Incisors Discussion

[fleamailman]

(02-01-2010 10:58 PM)Tales Wrote:  I see but it's best to be true to the facts right?

If without explaining enough, you can't just make someone normal for example fly by flapping his hands... right? the readers will be suspended in disbelief.

So some form of logic and common sense is still needed.

"...ah now, you simply go against every great writer in literature with that statement then, so find me even one great writer where some base logic doesn't poke holes into the work, so no, it's flap the wings first, then we can talk about flying once ones airborne, besides, with "live writing" you can change text in the repost, in printing though alas one can't, hence more and more writers are moving over to the internet..." said the goblin, thinking of the works of people like shakespeare, whose facts only fitted the plot where the plot actually needed it, so the goblin just continued by saying "...back in the writer's club days, there were always two types of people I remember, those who "theorized, prepared, explained, outlined and umpteen other things" and those who just wrote, period...", and with that the goblin simple asked for a paragraph to go upon, repeating clearly the question again "is the work destined for the written page or the Internet here", adding "...btw there's a "last post" thread on this site, please post a paragraph or two there, as to get a clear idea of what type of writer you are, time to start writing in my view..."

[Tales]

true there. The reason I am stuck currently is becos I flapped my wings but never see where I am flying to.

But I have written something for Incisors but a lot of stuff need some looking over but I am busy with work so until then this topic will remain whenever I fly and crash into a cliff.

[xBANannAx]

How about this? Time travelers from the future come, and get stuck on the island. And they have technology that is undetectable from 'old' satellites.

....yeah, so I have no ideas for the floating island. D: Sorry.


Do you plan on posting your story here?

[Tales]

Hi

Well the story will be here after I write the "inbetweens"

[fleamailman]

"...thanks..." said the goblin once more, and certainly the goblin would look over it once it was up, but he still hadn't quite understood if this work was destined for the page or for the thread because, depending on which, the layout and writing style had to change, saying "...well the truth is, a lot of very readable pieces never get very far on forums because, each post is just too large for the reader to follow, so one is dealing with cutting ones work into acceptable sizes, for example, you'd agree I hope, that suddenly seeing sixty lines is unacceptable even daunting to most readers now, whereas three posts of twenty lines each is both exactly the same thing, and more likely to be read too, because the reader thinks "oh, just twenty lines, OK let's read it"...", in fact the goblin always tried to stay under ten lines a post, seeing that many readers were now reading by blackberry or similar hand held devices, adding "...the publishing world is in turmoil at this point, the ebook market is just coming into being, and so the question really is which writer is going to adapt to the new media first I feel, hence the number of "live writers" evolving from forums..." but that was another story as they say, for the goblin's ten lines were now written matched with a picture too, only the two last reread and the storing elsewhere remained